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[Bounty Hunter (Bloodthirsty)]

Melody

i would have to agree with chalkley3...this piece lacks debt i believe becuase there really is no melody its just a repetitive loop of a short beat so as a listener it doesn't take me anywhere ( i just got to the door but didn't get to kick some booty). i would suggest to expand on the small melody that you have and the rest should fall into place. your percussion is fine but again it can't grow itself becuse there is no melody to change with.

[propa ganda]

Great Military Song

Very nice intro and feel. I definatly get a military feeling. The rythms are just right (i like the hip hop feel and the machinie gun like snare)and the melody works well. great job. This peice in my oppinion would workk well in as a movie style, thats just the kind of feeling i get from this as well. This will defeinatly get used by someone requiring a peice to show off something military realated.

[[K]- The Intersellar Ride]

I agree with Match eater

The only thing that i find missing in this song trully is the rythem sections. Their is no doubt that a some sycopated rythms will definatly cuase a more dnace like sound and cosequantly cause a few more booties to shake.

[trance 2.0]

This Peice sounds Unclear

In the this peice that you made their is nothing really for a listener to grab on. It feels more like background music for a dark scene. if it is to be one of those kinds of horror scenes your trying to portray i suggest adding possible some sound effects too the peice to spice it up, what you have now does give a feeling of tension it just gets old after a while, again theres no spice. Also balance in bringing out that robot voices, right know since it is not clear itjust muddies up the piece. In short is is definate that this peice in my opinion needs a little more work but i think you can make it happen.

[Remember The Titans]

Not bad For 20 min

This is preety good. The only thing that it flaews in is just the fact that it is so repetitive, But even then this song could still be used as great back ground music for a movie seen or something. In addition the few fills that you do have don;t seem to vary enough from the orignial beat. In fact it comes of off as the same exact thing over and over agian but just through a different filter. But again this was a 20 min project. My only suggestion would be just the variance in fills to spice it up a little bit more. Great use of percussion and nice melody.

tankbusta responds:

thank you and yes by the way this will be used in a small movie i am involved with
so that explains why its so generic and linear

[[Kriz] - Fluctuations]

Superb

Exllent Piece. Great Taste

[Wreck The Halls]

That Was Quite Amusing

Just work on balance issues and have the melody come out a little bit clearer. Good Job. Especially for metallizing a Christmas Song

Casualty responds:

The thing is, I'm too lazy to work out the balance.

[Vyle]

Pretty Good

This peice is pretty good. your melody is really intriguing to listen to and it sounds like you know your way around a drumrythems. The only think that really stops this from recieving a higher score is i think the ballance could be adjusted a litte (ex. the hihat feels out of place) and maybe a a harder overdriven sounding guitar but that would be just my preference (The guitar that is). Good peice.

cowdog2 responds:

thanks for the feed back dood. Yea, now that you mention about the highhat, your right...it does have kind of a powerful sound. Also...I've been meaning to fix the quality of my guitar. I've been recording kind of in a ghetto way, i seriously need to get a microphone.

[War of the Titans]

It was ok

The intro seems drawnout and resultanly it felt dull. the grooves are nice. The melodies are very simple that in the end is what i think brought this peice down in score. However it is clear that you like the percussion section alot. I would suggest simly to start with creating a more complex melody and that should help out with this peice a lot.

[Talking Asshole (Short)]

POTENTIAL!!!!!!

I did not understand the actuall beginning part and as an entirity i think it brings the whole peice down. However the rock out section was really cool. The only other problem would just be balance issues with the screaming in that they are unclear. Again its the instumental part that i actually like. Keep at it.

HahnStampfer responds:

Watch "Naked Lunch." It was pretty much a anecdote about society... great movie.