Knowledge of your Program
It is very clear that you are not as familiar with you music software as you could be. However you've got the basics though. I think the melody has potential and the drums are playing a decent rythm. Keep trying, i think you could come up with memorable that i would like to hear some day.
Wow, thanks a lot for the kind words! I can't afford a decent studio though and music really isn't what I'm good at. Still I'll probably keep doing some simple stuff like this one so that if I buy some studio like FL some day I won't have to start from square one. Also playing around with HammerHead I think is pretty fun so maybe I'll even submit something like this one again, but hopefully better.
So thanx for reviewing my simple first song and I wish you happy holidays.
I agree with Midnight dragon and odinXRIGHTXEye
To add on to what these critics have said i personally thing their should be a little bit more variation in the drumset groove. Doesn't have to be much but i think a little variance will help. Overall i think you bring out the feeling of an acid trip really well, however it feels more like an acid trip will at home on the couch. A good piece in terms of portraying an acid trip which is why you received the score you did. Keep at it.
This peice was ok
This was ok. The synth that you have enter in gives the peice a harsh feeling wich contrast to the soft feeling that you gave earlier in the piece with piano. Maybe if you switched to maybe a softer sounding instument that may help. Overall in thepiece i feel as though their is a sense of emptyness or incomplete. In short i feel as though something is missing to make this piece sound better. I dont know if the feeling of emptyness is what this peice is supposed to portray, If so that it does a good job of it. Again a ok peice just needs a little work.
Age 34, Male
Musician / Student
UCSC
California
Joined on 12/18/07
The most awesome song 
