The piano feels very limited (don't know if this was intended) and seems to be holding back some melodic/harmonic exploration that the trumpet can do. I would suggest adding a change in the piano line and going on from there.
Good brass, I like the idea of dueling horns. Especially at (15-24).
Why was "Forward Modulation_0.7" chosen for the title?
I am a minimalist =) the piano in this song was not intended to contain the same sweet sounding upper structures that my other work has.
Also the title was chosen based on modulation and change in general as a motif. The 0.7 is the rev number.
That bass came in it was so sexy! Awsome. =)
the bass is always sexy ;)
thanx for review
The percussion in this song is not the bad, It just has nothing to go with. Without any thing taking on a melodic role there is nothing to follow and it sounds like just random sounds accoompanied by an odd percussion pattern. Decent start but this needs work.
This is a really nice song you got hear. Its very upbeat and has i wanna kick some "a" feel to it. I would suggest to change up the main bass beat as it gets repetative and then to check on the balance. I get the feeling that their is stuff to be heard that is just drowned out by all the other sounds. = ) Nice
Is this for SNES or something?
You man this song sounds like it should be for snes man.
When the basse comes in melody given by the trumpet in the verse sections feels underdeveloped.
the snare in the beginning is ok. the rythms you've given it work in a military fashion that help portray a kings presence. When you enter the half time feels, it doesn't feel groovy enough like theres somthin missin.
Hope this review helps
Its been 4 years
Hey man this is a really good pice. you prowess on the guitar melodies is hard to come by. i have no advice that i can give to you, you know what your doing, i think you've been undercut and unheard. Lovin this piece man.
Ok a little Advice.. you may wanna change the name so it sounds more attractive and designate this song as a rocksong mroe than a game song. (of course this has nothing to do with the actuall music itself, just the marketing, that may make this song heard a little more)
Great on one condition
if this is really yours then kudo's superb however i belive i heard this this under a different artist's name and im hoping that's not the case (stealing major!!). but if your the same guy who made this then you've been majorly undercut score wise (cuase of the lack of lyrics im sure)
I dont think it uploaded correctly
all i got wen i heard was just some random sounds followed by a buzz til the end and it was only 43 seconds long. You may wanna check if it loaded just to be sure. if it is loaded correctly then it's just my computer
Expand on the melody
hey man the melody did not take me anywhere. it simply kept repeating the same AB pattern over and over again. providing some more variations not only in patterns organization wise but also in the melody itself will help provide listeners some thing to grab on to and not tune out after the first couple of bars becuase they've heard it already.
P.S i would remove the tambourine or at least replace it with a snare. i like were its placed rythmically it just becuase of the nature of the tabourine it was way out of balance (to loud) and as a result i feel like i was getting slapped in the face. agian something softer and a bit more subtle and warmer in tone i think will provide a better groove.
huh, i wonder if i have this saved...i don't think i do, but i'll keep that in mind the next time i create a song. thank for the review!!!
Mroe Variations in the melodic Line
Hey this peice was off to a great start...im likin the melody it is deifferent but it was never expanded on and taken as far as it could have been feeling very repetative aftr a certain point around 1:50 to 2:45. and that section around 1:50 to 2:45 did not feel like a variation it felt like all you did was remove the percussion and that revealed how weak the melody had gotten by that time in the song. Start by expanding the melodic line and the scores should go up.
When it was made, I was an uber newb. Audio Search Pandora_Tranquil. He did a remix of this thats pretty good, given the source material especially.
Nothing will ever be done with my music on here anymore, waste of time. But I like to see the random reviews it still gets :)
Thanks for the time to listen and crit. Appreciate it.
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